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The Whispering Knights

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Whispering-Knights-Puffin-Story-Books/dp/0140319778.

Author: Penelope Lively

Retold by Clare West

Illustrated by Ernesto Melo

(The simplified edition, published by Oxford University Press, 2008. 85 pages)

               The Whispering Knights is fiction story, the theme of the story is fantasy. The author of the book is Penelope Lively. Penelope Lively was born in Egypt in 1933. She went to school in England and then went to Oxford University, where she met her husband a university teacher. She began to write when her children were growing up and has written a large number of very popular books for children and adults. The whispering knights, which was written in 1971. Many of Penelope lively’s books are about the way that the past and the present are joined together.

               The story of Whispering Knights is began when, once there were three children lived in the village called steeple hampden. Three of them always play together. Their name were William, Martha, and Susie.  When they played in the old barn William had initiative to make witch’s brew. They collected all material to make witch’s brew such as the toe of frogs, the wing of bird and the skin of snake. When they was making the witch’s brew there was standing old bent woman, apparently it was Miss. Happle white. She told to the about witch that used to live in the old bard called Morgan Ie Fay. And the children worry about that. Martha asked to Miss Hepple whithe wheter they did was wrong or not.

               On that evening when Martha sleep, she was awaken by her bad dream in the middle of the night and she also saw a moving shadow like an old, bent woman dressed in black on the floor, it made Martha very shock and afraid. The next morning when the three children were going to play in the barn they saw something strange, the moving thick dusty pile straw, as the children threw water on the straw, there was hissing sound, but the flames went on burning, they supposed that it was one of the trick of Morgan. Miss hepplewhite gave suggestion to the children to make as much noise as they can because morgan didn’t like noise and the cross sign.

               The day passed when the children had made ritual much noise, they thought that morgan was gone, but it certainly not, the next accident happened, Susie got a misterious cake from Morgan,and there was a person named Mr steel  who will build a motorway or a new road which haul the old barn and the last Martha was on spell of Morgan Ie Fay and Morgan kidnapped Martha.William and Susie found Martha’ and they escaped Martha from Morgan, the greatest emotional tension ocurred When Susie and William bravely went to the Morgan house to save Martha, Morgan knew it and wanted to catch them. They ran as fast as posible. But, Morgan still chased them. They ran faster without speaking or looking behind them. They ran to the road, chruch, hospital and bus station. Unfortunately, Morgan still chase them. When Martha remembered that Morgan hated the Hampden Stones and that the weakness of Morgan. They ran to the stones and met a mysterious person. The person said to them to go to inside of the stone circle. There was a big battle between Morgan and the hampden stones and Morgan was died.

               William, Susie, and Martha came to the Miss Happlewhite’s house they told about all the story that happened in the hampden stones and they thanked to her because of her help. The barn and the village were safe, because Mr. Steel changed his decision and didn’t want to built a motorway. They lived happily and peacefully.

               Whispering knights story is very good to read not only for children but also adults, the mystery adventure story of the three boys who are very brave and have great curious. This story really evokes the emotions of the readers. In more fully equipped illustrations of images in it that make it easy to understand the contents of the story. One less of this book is that some of parts in this book do not tell the story explicitly about the part why Mr.steel will build motorway through the village. But overall this book is comfortable and nice to read.

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Moondial

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Moondial-Faber-Childrens-Classics-Cresswell/dp/0571322905
Author: Helen Cresswell
Retold by John Escort
Illustrated by Sally Wern Comport
(The simplified edition, published by Oxford University Press. 2008. 69 pages)
 
               The Moondial is fiction story, the theme of the story are mystery and adventure. The author of the book is Helen Cresswell. Helen Cresswell was born in Nottingham, in central England, in 1934, and started writing stories at the age of seven. She studied at London University, and was a teacher before becoming a full-time writer of children’s books. Moondial story was written in 1987. Helen Cresswell has written over a hundred books for children and is also well known for her television writing. 
               The Moondial story was began when, there was a girl named minty who had ability like a witch or something like it, she can see gosh, shadowy people, or hear invisible feet, her mother named kate worked in hospital all day. On the summer she decided to left minty on belton village ad stay with aunt mary. Unfortunately, when aunt mary answered the telephone, her mother kate got an accident. Minty went out and met mr. world, he told to minty that there were children that needed her help. When minty entered the house and the garden, she saw a statue of a boy and an old man that seemed to be fighting and hold a bowl obove their heads. Suddenly the time was changed from sundial to moondial, she heard frightened voice, she met boy named tom, gosh from different time. They made time and after that minty went to hospital to meet her mother kate. After that minty went back to belton house. And on the evening she went back to the past time and met another gosh named sarah. Minty traveled to tom and sarah time, then minty realized that tom had terrible family, and sarah was called as devil child because she had mark on her face. On that time minty decided to save them and told about her adventure and her mission to save tom and sarah using cassette to make her mother cure from her accident. All of the sudden, there was a woman named miss raven who came and wanted to investigate gosh, she also curious about Minty. Then, when tom and minty traveled to sarah time, they met a cruel woman named Miss vole who treated sarah badly. When she looked in the mirror she realized that miss vole was miss raven. Minty and tom decided to save sarah when they arrived in sarah time, sarah was being botherd by her friends who called her devil child. Minty bought mirror to against miss vole. And help sarah to erase her mark on her face. Minty and tom made sarah realized that she was beautiful and minty made miss vole reflected on the mirror, and something happened suddenly. Minty, tom, and sarah, and dorie, back to their own times.
               Overall moondial story is very good to be read, because in moondial story use simple language and easy to comprehend. And the story can evoke emotions and make the reader curious to read the next story. In moondial stories are also equipped with illustrations of images so that it can help understand the contents of the story. Unfortunately there are some parts in the story that is not tell in detail so that there are some parts of the story that hangs and make the reader of curious about it.